Very nice work. I think your colour choice, composition and idesign are fantastic. However, the blurred white strokes really detract from the image. I usually find that vector images work the best when you stay away from blurring. I suggest trying to keep the white strokes in, but without the blur.
hehe, yah...i was trying something new,
cause i've been using solids for all my vectors,
everything so defined,
i figured i wanted something more mysterious,
the white stuff here is suppose to dipict mist or something like fog..